Week 3: Constructive Critique Model – individual

Holocaust memorial in Berlin

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Constructive Critique Model – individual


This week’s agenda is to analyse a picture selected picture from anywhere. Analyse the artwork or design using the Constructive Criticism Model.


Author: Shahak Shapira
The author has taken a person who has posed at the memorial place and blended it with a picture of the corpses of the holocaust’s victims.

Response:

At first, I only looked at the left picture where the girl was doing an acrobatic move against the wall of memorial stone. I didn’t think that deeply of the murdered people but then the picture of the right really visualised that for me. It made me feel anger and think about how disrespectful and ignorant people are. It also got me feel how selfish people are. By taking a picture of the known place like this and trying to get as many likes feels very wrong. It loses the idea of why this place was originally built.
Seeing the dead people piling up around the girl on the right picture made me feel sad and disappointed how people don’t understand the point of this place.

Description:

The left picture is about memorial of about the Holocaust and has the girl leaning on it doing a handstand. The right picture has the same girl blended in the scene of killed Jews and other victims. The Holocaust was a genocide in which about six million European Jews were killed by Adolf Hitler’s Nazi Germany. There were also non-Jewish victims like Romani, Poles and many other people.
The left picture is taken from an Instagram application of a girl. The Instagram picture has 126 likes. The girl took the picture to show off her skills by doing some hard move and at some cool place. Without knowing the true meaning of this place, the girl is ignorant. People should not probably take selfies at the place like this and get to know about the place’s history.
The right picture the girl is leaning against the wall next to the door. A lot of dead people around her.

Analysis and Interpretation:

The author has tried to make people strongly emotional by putting these two pictures next to each other. To make people think about the place more than just a touristic place. People should know why this memorial thing is built in here and read the signs’ descriptions to understand. Many people want to be popular and they think that taking picture at some famous place will increase their “followers”. Therefore, the girl in the picture selfishly took the picture at this place without knowing the meaning of it.
When people look at the picture, they would understand right away what is wrong with it. It is disrespectful to the memorial place and to the people who have died. It would feel very wrong to have this kind of picture for the people who knows about the Holocaust.

Evaluation and Judgement:


I even have stronger response to this picture when I looked up for more information of the Holocaust and how many people have died there. This place should have more respect and understanding. This makes me think how ignorant some people are and sad because they don’t know anything. And how people are attracted by media and popularity.

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